My Magical Creature 100wc

WALT: describe a magical creature that lives in the pink lake or animal hospital.


In a lake many years ago lived a ugly but kind creature he was titled the monster in the pink lake when really he was just ugly but he was generous. He would grant you a wish if you aren’t scared of him but everyone was terrified of him..“What have i done?” he asked himself “`EVERYTHING!“ a creature says running away as fast as a cheetah “but what?” he says sadly walking away back to the lake.Day after day he felt sadder and sadder everyday until one day he found someone who actually cared about how he felt.

Rata and the Waka

                     We have been doing critical thinking with the story of Rata and his Waka.

100 word challenge

     

              Walt use 100 words to write a story          

During the misty, stormy night I could hear scratching noises coming from my walls. I didn’t take any notice of it until suddenly the wooden door swings open with a gasp of wind.  Unexpectedly, when I looked closer I could see dark crimson blood dripping down my door.  I shouted “Somebody help me!” Then suddenly my windows swing open I go to shut them then I  see a grave in my front yard that doesn’t belong there.  I frantically start running to my parents room the door was wide open, but then the door slams shut. I scream in fear.

100 word challenge

THIS WEEK MY FOCUS WAS MAKING MY STORY INTERESTING AND STAYING        WITHIN THE 100 WORD LIMIT.

 In a forest far, far away there was this cup, it wasn’t just some ordinary cup this cup was a sign of danger. If you made any contact with this cup, even walking close to this cup you would have bad luck for the rest of the eternity. Even after you have passed away. Not only bad luck to you, but all your relatives and close friends. A lot of people have tried staying safe around this cup but they haven’t managed to get one step past this cup without getting hurt. After years the cup still has it’s curse.

100 word challenge

This week we were given a story starter ... "but what if I was in charge?" My focus was making my story interesting and staying within the 100 word limit.

                                    ....But if I was in charge?

 Majority of people do stop and help the homeless but some don’t. Some just walk past and act like the homeless aren’t there. Some would even yell at them saying “get a job” and chuck food at them. Some homeless would hurt the people back but some just sit there waiting for some more people to pass by. But if I was in charge of one thing, it would be a supermarket with clothes and food . I would travel the world and help the homeless people out a bit. I would give them loads of food and clothes.

My learning goals for 2018

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